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Inner Beauty

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Open up and let your inner beauty shine through





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Image size
3008x2000px 1.55 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D40
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/8.0
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Jul 2, 2009, 3:56:10 AM
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Jessica-AuBuchon's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I can see this pushed into an awesome photo! Flowers are done allot, and they are done allot for a reason. To have flower photos stand out in the crowd, allot of though needs to be put into framing the photo while taking it and post editing.

When the human eye looks at a photo of a flower, their eyes go to the middle of the flower, that is your focal point. Currently the focal point is right on a thirds mark. Try moving it down to the corner more. because the eye goes to the center, the out of focus peddles on the bottom and right of the flower are distracting from the focal point. I would also like to see more negate space on the top and left of the flower.

Strengthen your composition and this will be an amazing final piece.